Comments on: The Process of a Business Nip Tuck http://www.thewritersmanifesto.com/blog/2008/03/20/business-nip-tuck/ freelance writing by a freelance writer that works in the freelance writing field Thu, 09 Feb 2012 01:57:41 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: 25,000 Words And A Week In A Freelance Writer's Life | The Writers Manifesto Blog http://www.thewritersmanifesto.com/blog/2008/03/20/business-nip-tuck/comment-page-1/#comment-3186 25,000 Words And A Week In A Freelance Writer's Life | The Writers Manifesto Blog Tue, 25 Mar 2008 14:45:33 +0000 http://www.thewritersmanifesto.com/blog/2008/03/20/business-nip-tuck/#comment-3186 [...] The Process of a Business Nip Tuck [...] [...] The Process of a Business Nip Tuck [...]

]]> By: Monika http://www.thewritersmanifesto.com/blog/2008/03/20/business-nip-tuck/comment-page-1/#comment-3080 Monika Fri, 21 Mar 2008 02:20:44 +0000 http://www.thewritersmanifesto.com/blog/2008/03/20/business-nip-tuck/#comment-3080 @ Harry: well, it just matched perfectly what I was going to portray, plus handing you the Dr. certificate allows you to wear a mmmhhhh....stethoscope now. Hehehe.... I thank you for doing an amazing job with it! @ Amy: yes they certainly did. I'm well impressed in what they have done and how well they carried my vision to final completion! Thank you for the compliment. @ Terry: thanks buddy, I sure hope so. Had already my first taker which is great. I've wanted to do this for a long time coming and now that it is done, I feel like a million dollars. @ Simonne: it's great to get feedback like this as it shows I'm on the right track. I appreciate you saying this, thank you very much. @ Griz: haven't I just. I'm ecstatic right now and so excited about my future. I would certainly love to hear what you've got to say. Skype me if you wish, I'm online now. Bring it on my friend. @ James: thanks you for this. Like I mentioned to Vic, I've changed over the link issue. I appreciate your feedback on the buy now buttons and am working on getting these integrated. You Men with Pens certainly rock. :-) @ Harry: well, it just matched perfectly what I was going to portray, plus handing you the Dr. certificate allows you to wear a mmmhhhh….stethoscope now. Hehehe….

I thank you for doing an amazing job with it!

@ Amy: yes they certainly did. I’m well impressed in what they have done and how well they carried my vision to final completion! Thank you for the compliment.

@ Terry: thanks buddy, I sure hope so. Had already my first taker which is great. I’ve wanted to do this for a long time coming and now that it is done, I feel like a million dollars.

@ Simonne: it’s great to get feedback like this as it shows I’m on the right track. I appreciate you saying this, thank you very much.

@ Griz: haven’t I just. I’m ecstatic right now and so excited about my future. I would certainly love to hear what you’ve got to say. Skype me if you wish, I’m online now. Bring it on my friend.

@ James: thanks you for this. Like I mentioned to Vic, I’ve changed over the link issue. I appreciate your feedback on the buy now buttons and am working on getting these integrated. You Men with Pens certainly rock. :-)

]]> By: Monika http://www.thewritersmanifesto.com/blog/2008/03/20/business-nip-tuck/comment-page-1/#comment-3079 Monika Fri, 21 Mar 2008 01:49:12 +0000 http://www.thewritersmanifesto.com/blog/2008/03/20/business-nip-tuck/#comment-3079 @ Vic: thank you for your valuable feedback. I think your idea on adding buy now buttons is a great one and I'm going to do this. I've also rectified the opening on blank pages. Thanks for telling me this wasn't a good option. I will deter from that in the future. :-) @ Vic: thank you for your valuable feedback. I think your idea on adding buy now buttons is a great one and I’m going to do this.

I’ve also rectified the opening on blank pages. Thanks for telling me this wasn’t a good option. I will deter from that in the future. :-)

]]> By: James Chartrand - Men with Pens http://www.thewritersmanifesto.com/blog/2008/03/20/business-nip-tuck/comment-page-1/#comment-3077 James Chartrand - Men with Pens Fri, 21 Mar 2008 00:01:12 +0000 http://www.thewritersmanifesto.com/blog/2008/03/20/business-nip-tuck/#comment-3077 Thanks for the linkout, Monika, and we're really pleased you like your site. Elegant swank is what it's all about, and we hope that your ROI is rich and beautiful. Vic is right. If you're going to show your prices and have packages, include a buy now with some way for clients to communicate their needs to you at the same time. People like anonymity sometimes. (On the other hand, if a client doesn't want to email you, it's probably not a great gig.) Links opening in a new window are also something to avoid - we stopped using them a while back when we heard that there were complaints in the blogosphere. But these are small details. The image is what matters, and it'll make a difference, I'm sure. Thanks for the linkout, Monika, and we’re really pleased you like your site. Elegant swank is what it’s all about, and we hope that your ROI is rich and beautiful.

Vic is right. If you’re going to show your prices and have packages, include a buy now with some way for clients to communicate their needs to you at the same time. People like anonymity sometimes. (On the other hand, if a client doesn’t want to email you, it’s probably not a great gig.)

Links opening in a new window are also something to avoid – we stopped using them a while back when we heard that there were complaints in the blogosphere.

But these are small details. The image is what matters, and it’ll make a difference, I’m sure.

]]> By: Grizzly http://www.thewritersmanifesto.com/blog/2008/03/20/business-nip-tuck/comment-page-1/#comment-3076 Grizzly Thu, 20 Mar 2008 22:37:42 +0000 http://www.thewritersmanifesto.com/blog/2008/03/20/business-nip-tuck/#comment-3076 Monika, My my, haven't you come a long way. I couldn't be happier for you and think the site looks great. Very polished. I do have a couple of SEO suggestions for you but only if you want to hear them - let me know. Knock em dead. Monika,

My my, haven’t you come a long way. I couldn’t be happier for you and think the site looks great. Very polished. I do have a couple of SEO suggestions for you but only if you want to hear them – let me know. Knock em dead.

]]> By: Simonne http://www.thewritersmanifesto.com/blog/2008/03/20/business-nip-tuck/comment-page-1/#comment-3074 Simonne Thu, 20 Mar 2008 21:32:19 +0000 http://www.thewritersmanifesto.com/blog/2008/03/20/business-nip-tuck/#comment-3074 Besides the fact that it looks so stylish due to the black & white choice, your sales pitch is also well written, as it appeals to the dream which every business person has: to make that business more successful. The benefits of hiring you are obvious, and they are nicely supported by the testimonials. I wish you lots of happy clients, Simonne Besides the fact that it looks so stylish due to the black & white choice, your sales pitch is also well written, as it appeals to the dream which every business person has: to make that business more successful. The benefits of hiring you are obvious, and they are nicely supported by the testimonials.

I wish you lots of happy clients,

Simonne

]]> By: Terry Didcott http://www.thewritersmanifesto.com/blog/2008/03/20/business-nip-tuck/comment-page-1/#comment-3073 Terry Didcott Thu, 20 Mar 2008 21:08:01 +0000 http://www.thewritersmanifesto.com/blog/2008/03/20/business-nip-tuck/#comment-3073 Hey I like it very much! That's a really good look and it does give that air of professionalism and sophistication. Good choice! That should get the big dollar clients knocking at your door! Terry Hey I like it very much! That’s a really good look and it does give that air of professionalism and sophistication. Good choice!

That should get the big dollar clients knocking at your door!

Terry

]]> By: Amy http://www.thewritersmanifesto.com/blog/2008/03/20/business-nip-tuck/comment-page-1/#comment-3069 Amy Thu, 20 Mar 2008 16:47:58 +0000 http://www.thewritersmanifesto.com/blog/2008/03/20/business-nip-tuck/#comment-3069 Well done, Monika. The pen men did a nice job. Well done, Monika. The pen men did a nice job.

]]> By: Harrison McLeod (the doctor is in!) http://www.thewritersmanifesto.com/blog/2008/03/20/business-nip-tuck/comment-page-1/#comment-3066 Harrison McLeod (the doctor is in!) Thu, 20 Mar 2008 16:17:00 +0000 http://www.thewritersmanifesto.com/blog/2008/03/20/business-nip-tuck/#comment-3066 Monika, Very cool post! Dr. Harrison McLeod...I like the sound of that. The theme looks great and I wish you all the best with it. It's amazing what a little face lift can do. Thanks for the links. Monika,

Very cool post! Dr. Harrison McLeod…I like the sound of that.

The theme looks great and I wish you all the best with it. It’s amazing what a little face lift can do. Thanks for the links.

]]> By: Vic http://www.thewritersmanifesto.com/blog/2008/03/20/business-nip-tuck/comment-page-1/#comment-3065 Vic Thu, 20 Mar 2008 15:18:01 +0000 http://www.thewritersmanifesto.com/blog/2008/03/20/business-nip-tuck/#comment-3065 I love it I think it looks great and the black and white option is so elegant used correctly. Two things I would change. Studies have shown that many people do not buy services or products just because they cant find how to pay. I would actually add buy now buttons right under your pkg's. Make it easy for a potential customer to hire you. You can always make the buttons yourself and make them also elegant. The second is more of a technical issue. On your Hire Me page in your Services the links open to a new page. This could also be a small turn off since some browsers block pop-ups and also back to studies again LMAO have shown people like to stay inside the website when clicking they only like to be clicked out if they are going to a new website. To Your Success Vic I love it I think it looks great and the black and white option is so elegant used correctly.

Two things I would change.

Studies have shown that many people do not buy services or products just because they cant find how to pay.

I would actually add buy now buttons right under your pkg’s. Make it easy for a potential customer to hire you. You can always make the buttons yourself and make them also elegant.

The second is more of a technical issue. On your Hire Me page in your Services the links open to a new page. This could also be a small turn off since some browsers block pop-ups and also back to studies again LMAO have shown people like to stay inside the website when clicking they only like to be clicked out if they are going to a new website.

To Your Success

Vic

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