I Got The Power
It is said that with great power comes great responsibility. Most of us freelance writer types don’t really have to worry about that, right? Most of us aren’t engaged in projects that are likely to change the world. We’re not speech-writing for President Obama. (I sometimes don’t think anyone is, but that’s another story.) We’re not committing to paper the edicts of a new religion that will brainwash an entire nation.
So, do we really have to worry about what we write? Should we be overly concerned with how our words fall from our thoughts onto the keyboard?
I would say we do. Okay, so you’re not Obama’s speechwriter, but your words still have power. Words are the most powerful weapon on this earth. They can divide nations, set continents aflame, or they can bring peace where none existed. They can tear families apart and bring strangers together in lifelong union. They can heal or destroy, and do everything in between.
A few years ago I was reporting for ITT, a large U.S. defence company. One of the stories concerned a competitor who had been contracted by the U.S. government to build an astonishingly huge number of new warplanes. At a press conference on the subject, one of the top officials in the USAF was asked why so many planes were needed. The total cretin – for, despite his rank, I can only assume that was what he was – replied: “Have you seen how big China is?” Seven little words, but the message they conveyed was monumental: We are preparing for a time when we may have to bomb the shit out of China. Awesome. A diplomatic tour-de-force.
I know we’re not all involved with delivering words at that level, and of course we’re not all as stupid as the top-ranking military minds of this world, but the words we use still have power.
It doesn’t matter what you are writing about, if someone else reads it they will be affected. You may change their views or reinforce them, but a person cannot unread what they’ve read. At the very least you may anger them because they spent time reading your words when you had nothing whatsoever of any import to say.
Freelance writers who write for public consumption must take responsibility. They must accept that their words may be taken at face value and gobbled up. Most freelancers today will have written SEO articles – essays designed to bring traffic to a website so that goods can be sold. If your article succeeds in this aim, you have influenced another person to part with their cash. Nothing wrong with that, it happens every day.
But here’s the kicker: if your words are wrong, you may also cause that person to part with far more than cash.
I don’t intend to get too far into this, but consider the pharmaceutical companies who have for years convinced you that you must take their products to survive. Then search – if you are so inclined – for the vast amount of evidence that, actually, you were lied to, that the products they purvey as health-enhancing are actually killing you. Consider cancer: we were told thirty-odd years ago that we had to smother ourselves with sunscreen or we would all die of skin cancer (the sun being such an unnatural part of our environment, of course). So we started to do this and, since then, cases of skin cancer have gone through the roof. Now we are starting to get the truth. Most commercial sunscreens include ingredients that are carcinogenic – that enter your bloodstream and cause the very cells you are trying to protect to mutate. In truth, the Vitamin D derived from sensible exposure to the sun is known to protect against over 30 different cancers, including … wait for it … skin cancer. And don’t even get me started on the treatments that destroy the one thing that keeps cancer at bay every day of our lives: the immune system.
Rant over. So, for the freelance writer, what does all this mean? I think this:
- We need to be honest within the strictures of the writing project. And if that’s not at all possible, we need to dump the project.
- We need to research our facts. I don’t mean Google for “facts” by other people who haven’t bothered ascertaining the truth; I mean really dig for credible evidence that backs up our opinions.
- We need to be coherent. In writing, a badly-made point is unprofessional. At worst, it can convey an entirely wrong impression and cause harm.
- We need to learn our trade. If we want our readers to take us seriously, we need to look like we at least have a proper command of the English language.
Before you start your next writing assignment, think about the impact your words may have, and craft them accordingly. Always remember how great is the power you are wielding.








Mary E. Ulrich | Jan 21, 2011 | Reply
I think some of Obama’s speeches are well written, but other than that–I agree with everything you say.
I especially liked, “a person cannot unread what they’ve read.”
When we REALLY know something, we HAVE to write about it. And there is great power in the writing–even if we have few readers.
Thanks for the pep talk on the power of words. Now, to that post I HAVE to write….
Mark | Jan 21, 2011 | Reply
Thanks, Mary. Re Obama. Yeah I’m sure you’re right. I wrote that for effect. I have no idea if his speeches are any good. So much for my comment about proper research.
P.S. Jones @Diary of A Mad Freelancer | Jan 21, 2011 | Reply
One of my specific deal breakers with my own copywriting clients is that I won’t write what I know to be a lie. For example, I can’t write that cigarettes make your teeth whiter because I know for a fact they don’t. On the other hand, if I’m writing website copy for a business that claims excellent customer service, I’m not going to demand their customer service records before I can write that line. And I’m not going to feel bad at all if someone comes to site and experiences bad service because I “convinced” them to do it.
I guess what I’m saying is that there is a line that exists between misleading copy and writing based on the materials given. And no, I can’t define it but (in the words of Justice Stewart) I know it when I see it.
RMB | Jan 21, 2011 | Reply
Good article, but have to say a bit of a bizarre jab about Obama’s speeches. Say what you like about the man, he’s an outstanding public speaker and his speeches are second to none.
Other than that found it really useful! I want to live in Spain as well, depending on whether my freelance writing pays off
George Angus | Jan 21, 2011 | Reply
Mark,
This is an important, insightful post. Sometimes we write things thinking that no one will ever really read it. Well, you never know. Words have impact and we need to remember that.
Yes, we do have the power.
George
Mark Pepper | Jan 22, 2011 | Reply
Hey RMB, cheers, and, as I said to Mary, you’re right: my Obama comment was crap and based on no knowledge whatsoever. Proves a point, though, eh? Once it’s out there and read, you (I) have to bear the consequences. Hope your plans work out well for you. Hasta pronto!
Mark Pepper | Jan 22, 2011 | Reply
Hey George, thanks buddy. Insightful but for my political cretinicity. I made that word up.
Mark | Jan 25, 2011 | Reply
Hi there, PS Jones. Thanks for your comment. I heartily agree there’s a line you have to gauge for yourself. We’d none of us get much work done if we researched every nook and cranny of a client’s business. Some of the best-paying jobs are with the biggest corporations, and we all know they’re not exactly whiter than white. Personally, I’d have no problem being paid to say deep-fried Mars bars are good for you, because I’m not about to knock back a cheque to protect the dumb-ass who’d believe it. The problem is, so many of the best lies are told by governments and multinationals, and even the most intelligent Joe Public can get fooled by those.
Sounds like you have the balance right in your assessment of what jobs to accept. Sometimes it’s just a gut thing. Cheers for now, PSJ.